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Abhishek Jamalabad
18-08-2012, 11:42 AM
An experimental image from Polem, Goa. Shot a part of the beach through a tiny, interestingly-shaped hole in a rock. Not up to the mark but would like your views on this... :)

Canon 500D, 18-55mm IS
FL 37mm
SS 1/320
Av 9.0
ISO 100
EC -1.3
This was shot in harsh late-morning light, I guess it would have turned out better in evening light.

Thanks, C&C welcome.

Sabyasachi Patra
18-08-2012, 09:54 PM
Here the foreground tooth kind of shape draws more attention and dominates the scene. The frame should not dominate the scene. In the distant scene, the green part of the hill gets slight attention, but it is not strong enough here. The inverted V shape is the point at the centre where the attention goes, but there is nothing in the background at that point. May be if a ship or something would have appeared in the horizon, then that would have become a stronger point of interest. Thanks for sharing.
Sabyasachi

Mrudul Godbole
18-08-2012, 10:24 PM
Interesting composition. These frame-in-frame compositions are mostly photographed through a door or window so the attention goes to the landscape in the background. Its good to see you trying different compositions in landscape. Look forward to see more. Thanks for sharing.