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Jitendra Katre
20-11-2009, 04:14 PM
canon 450d,18-55,f-4,1/20,iso-400

Mrudul Godbole
20-11-2009, 04:32 PM
Nice image. The coconut trees lead the eye into the frame. Would have liked some more colours in the sky to make it more interesting. The trees in the foreground (bottom right) don't add much to the image, you can think of cropping that. Keep posting..

Sabyasachi Patra
20-11-2009, 04:35 PM
I would have preferred a tighter composition. Moving the camera to the left would have enhanced the composition further, as the space at the right would have been lessened. Thanks for sharing.

Cheers,
Sabyasachi

Bibhav Behera
20-11-2009, 07:06 PM
Agree about a tighter composition. The coconut leaves on the left are clipped, including them would have been better. Also the wires on the left take away a bit of image punch... Overall the colours are nice and give a good feel.

Anuradha Nautiyal
21-11-2009, 05:43 PM
Hi Jitendra,

A very beautiful perspective I must say.... Apart from moving it more to the left I feel maybe a little under exposure could have created a different image with trees coming out black and the sky showing darker colours.

Thanks
Anu