Moon rise from behind the hill ,also visible the tent, F5.6, 6 sec, ISO 800
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Moon rise from behind the hill ,also visible the tent, F5.6, 6 sec, ISO 800
The inclusion of the tent lights, takes away the attention from the moon rise. If you move away and use a wide angle showing the lights of the tents against the skyline and moon, it can helping in telling a travel story.
However, in this case, we get no idea that this is a wilderness area and the buidling/tent dominates.
The moon rising just over the hill looks nice. But as Sabyasachi has pointed out, the lights from the tent are distracting. You got any other compositions from this series? Thanks for sharing.
I agree that the tent is distracting here. The moon rise looks good. Maybe you could have used the light from the tent to illuminate a bit of the foreground and tried a composition accordingly. Thanks for sharing.