Wow, a beautiful take off pose. The whites are blown - must have been a harsh light, can be recovered in PP. Maybe a slightly lower aperture would help with a higher Shutter speed and more details.

Nice wingspread and the shadow of the right wing on the left wing gives a warm feel to the picture. Slightly more room on top will further enhance this already lovely composition.

Loved the eye contact, nice and straight horizon and the details.

Thanks for sharing

Rajan