Always try to get the Sun and its reflection in the clear. So moving slightly to the right would have been even better. While showing the foreground objects (in this case the reeds and grasses) as silhouette, it is better to show one well defined object instead of many. That way you would be able to simplify the composition. Good effort. Some clouds in the sky would have been nice. Thanks for sharing.

Cheers,
Sabyasachi