This gives a good feel of the situation. I agree that cropping a bit from the bottom would be better. Unfortunately, the shutter speed was low.

It would have been good if the elephants were not angled away from you. It would have been better if they had angled towards you, so that light would have fallen on their heads and you would have got a better shutter speed. Overall, a nice environmental image.

Cheers,
Sabyasachi