I'm liking this image quite a lot. I'm thinking if it would have been better to either zoom in a bit more to cut off the tail completely and also have slightly lesser space at the right of the frame or to zoom out a little to include more of the tail.!

On a side note, I'm not very sure but would it be better to increase the amount of sharpening you apply during processing in lightroom to a value slightly higher than the default value you use usually?

tfs